If comic strips ended the way *I* wanted them to.

[theoldwolf]

Today's Retail is interesting:



However, I found the ending slightly unsatisfying. Here is my improved version:



I can't draw worth tuppence, or I'd do my own strip...



For what it's worth, I think Feuti's work is outstanding.

Comments

[deckardcanine.livejournal.com]

I've learned to chop my orders into manageable portions at Chipotle.

You don't think you can create even an NLCTC-style comic?

[stiobhan.livejournal.com]

pachi pachi pachi. appare!

[r-caton.livejournal.com]

Reminds me strangely of Milligans description of his first turns on guard when partly in uniform and partly in tatty civvies
"HALT! Who goes there?!
"P*ss orf"